帮我指出这篇文章错误的地方，大概能六级这文章能拿几分
Mental heathEveryong knows mental heath is very impotangt.if someone’s body is heaths we can’t say he is heathy due to a heathy man is not only body heath but mental heath and other important things.so we must keep our mental heathy.
As for college can have some ativities to relax students.can’t put much presure to students ,such as have a lot of homework ,have a lot of examination.because it’s not good for student’s mental heath development.school aslo have to hold some meeting about mental heath make students know how important it works.
As for us ,firstly,
have to keep a happy mind.secondly. we can take part in same ativitis.i ‘m often play with my friends ,it can make me relaxed,you may find if you start a new task after that you ennergy is strong,butplease pay attention that don’t play over.last but not least if you comeacross some trouble you must speak it out,share it with your friends or your parents,don't keep it in you mind because it can hurt you withou being notise.
In shorts,mental heath is important,I hope all of you may have heathy mental and can help someone who have mental heath problems.go ereryone! 错得很神经质的。都懒得指娜错了。 我想知道这样有没有70分就可以了 有吗？ 7分应该会有吧 没有70....我上次写的比你好多了...才60多..
六级作文要求比较高 一看没看懂许多。。单词都认识，然后看不懂。那就是错误了 出了成绩来说一下 感觉单词很多错,是打上来的时候打错吗?
感觉有中国式英语...
由于忙于复习线代.暂时没空详细看....估计不会太高分....
PS.我是师弟...哇咔咔..所以,不知道六级的评分如何... 错别字很多。中国式英语，语法不通。感觉就是英语好久没学，连比较基本的语法结构都不通。估计就7分吧。还是改写短句好些。一般一句十个词左右，无大毛病，分数11分左右。 原帖由 手指饼当烟 于 2008-12-27 18:22 发表 https://www.gdutbbs.com/images/common/back.gif
一看没看懂许多。。单词都认识，然后看不懂。那就是错误了
这解释真TMD经典 比我的还差，我都能找出N多错误，唉，我够失败的，你比我还失败 这作文。。实在是看不下去了。。。 一开始就漏左个THAT，我都懒得看下去了 放到WORD里面就自动把你的语法拼写错误指出啦！
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