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Topic：The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.
The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?

my assignment:

The thread of nuclear weapons is mostly considered as a trump card in the peaceful world. Owing to it, economical and pure energy serves for our daily life. Above all, I agree with that human-beings get more advantages from nuclear technology rather than disadvantages.

Long before,
thanks for the most powerful country – America, people in Iraq and Iran suffered a lot from the war, which was recently finished. It is acknowledged that America armed with awful nuclear weapons, so that no one dare to fight against America intently. Take an assumption, whether Uncle Sam would attack Iraq if it owns the same powerful weapon with him? I guess not, because President Bush had to take his people into consideration that nuclear harm would effect many people and even their off springs. In other words, nuclear weapons guard peace with its danger.

For another, nuclear technology provide cheap and clean energy instead of coal, oil and nature gas which are polluted, expensive and hardly available. Though the nuclear power brings in lots of harm to human in the process of human society-the bomb in Hiroshima is a case in point, it is not its false but the ugliness of greediness.

As has been noted, apply nuclear technology in a kind-hearted way, which would be an angle for man and the world.


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