长空大侠 发表于 2005-4-19 01:09

[原创]演讲稿： Hold on to your dream even it's leaving

这个是偶前阵子去龙洞参加英语演讲比赛的演讲稿，发个贴为以前学英文的那段日子做个纪念。

长空大侠 发表于 2005-4-19 01:11

很是感谢后院的 BIKINI 提供的帮助！
长空在此谢过了！！！

chosenone 发表于 2005-4-19 09:13

different people got diff dreams, some higher, more abitious,some simple, just ordinary ones.   .... get a job that he liked, live a place that is quiet, and doing the things that he enjoyed. People are greedy, when one dream comes true, it oftern leads them to another, one after another...never an end.. consuming them.. bring them pains..

So, it is also important of being satisfied:)

christina 发表于 2005-4-19 15:19

加精，不过我个人觉得点题不够，最后也显得有点单薄。
还有下面这句感觉怪怪的，但说不上哪里不对。。。
“At last we don’t have courage to turn the dream to be true any more.”

christina 发表于 2005-4-19 15:20

忘了说，这里非常支持原创，也祝福楼主的演讲有个好结果。

不是吧？ 发表于 2005-4-19 15:44

christina在 2005-4-19 15:19 发表:

加精，不过我个人觉得点题不够，最后也显得有点单薄。
还有下面这句感觉怪怪的，但说不上哪里不对。。。
“At last we don’t have courage to turn the dream to be true any more.”

中文英语？

长空大侠 发表于 2005-4-19 22:44

呵呵，原谅我这么个专业的吧～
另：那个演讲衰了，哈哈

christina 发表于 2005-4-20 00:41

总的来说，楼主写得很不错

qlyx 发表于 2005-4-20 12:03

楼主什么专业？

长空大侠 发表于 2005-4-22 17:56

电气工程，怎么？
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