qlyx 发表于 2005-6-17 19:12

Love yourself

               Love yourself


Love yourself too much.
And you'll be seen as a big-head.
Don't love yourself enough.
And you'll be seen as introverted.

Do you love yourself "just right",
Whatever that may be?
Are you confident but not full of yourself.
Not playued with vanity?

It's good to feel good about yourself,
It's good to feel good about someone else.
What's bad to you might seen good to me,
Who's to say waht's really right, ultimately?

Nobody's all bad, nobady's all good,
If you don't love yourself, then maybe you should.
They say that if you don't love yourself,
Neither will anyone else.

I say do what you will,
Go with what you feel.
Love always starts from within,
No matter what causes the feeling.

christina 发表于 2005-6-17 23:50

good

Wilson841201 发表于 2005-6-22 01:06

自己写嘅啊?都算唔错啦,广工嘅学生可以写出咁嘅诗,算有一定嘅水平!!!

继续努力!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

jmdf009 发表于 2005-6-23 23:50

真个能不能算是 free verse ?...
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