LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:14

self-assessment

幫手睇睇語法問題 ，因為要交俾BOSS，慎重慎重~~
Please find my self-assessment as below:
Review of the year, I learned more knowledge and skill,and the most important is to learn the job and working attitude. Moreover, It let me in good chance work here and perform different roles.

The highlighted job role such as:

1. Resource Planing; it is the new challenge for me.No doubt about it , i have to pay more effort and be more careful to the new task.

2.Committee of Birthday Party;

3. Administration of MPF CCC;I am on the role almost 2years for support hotline,provide the efficient,accurate,professional ways to help them solving some HR, Finance,Reports and other problem.

In the coming year,I hope I can take opportunity to join some training for self-upgraded. Eg : Excel skill, management course and so on .I'll work harder to make contribution to our company.

gdut_stu 发表于 2010-1-9 12:20

F_Friends 发表于 2010-1-9 12:22

一睇就晕了~~

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:22

回复 2# gdut_stu


    有沒問題阿GOD。

▄︻┳═一－－ 发表于 2010-1-9 12:24

楼主是广外毕业的。

gdut_stu 发表于 2010-1-9 12:24

no problem for me

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:27

英文已經廢左~~

sasalin 发表于 2010-1-9 12:29

第一个skill改 skills。。
it is the new challenge for me.No doubt about it , i have to pay more effort and be more careful to the new task.
不用the吧。。
New challenge as it's to me. （原句也行，改a就行）There is no doubt that i have to pay more attention and spend more effort to take care of the new task...
随便看了一句，不知道行不行~

gdut_stu 发表于 2010-1-9 12:30

angle女都毕业一年多了

时光错落 发表于 2010-1-9 12:30

Review of the year, I learned more knowledge and skill
是不是用现在完成时比较好- -？

and the most important is to
觉得怪怪的 and the most important thing is to - -？

provide the
providing- -？

Reports and other problem
Reports or other problems - -？

join some training
join some trainings- -？

.I'll work harder to make contribution to our company.
还是觉得怪怪的- -

英语退步了好多- -
而且发现看这些只能一句句看 无法联系上下文了- -
上面都是自己的感觉- -可能有错 见谅- -

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:32

回复 w.gdutbbs.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=7535088&ptid=360903]8# sasalin


    好，我再睇睇改下

时光错落 发表于 2010-1-9 12:33

回复 8# sasalin

好厉害

sasalin 发表于 2010-1-9 12:33

and the most important is to learn the job and working attitude
and most important 或 and the most improtant thing ...
to learn the job and working attitude 你想表达什么？中文

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:33

回复 9# gdut_stu


    差唔多兩年

sasalin 发表于 2010-1-9 12:36

回复 10# 时光错落


    厉害 一下看了这么多句

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:36

回复 10# 时光错落


    the important part is ...

好~~再睇下D小問題先~~

gdut_stu 发表于 2010-1-9 12:36

回复 14# LovelyAngel

食饭先

十指紧扣 发表于 2010-1-9 12:37

第一次见LZ

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:38

回复 18# 十指紧扣


    神出鬼沒~

LovelyAngel 发表于 2010-1-9 12:39

回复 17# gdut_stu


    你都要食飯的？
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