化鳞生肌胶囊英语写作中增强语句表现力的方法

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化鳞生肌胶囊纵观多年来国家四、六级英语作文考试，考生作文成绩欠佳的主要原因除了准确性和连贯性差之外，语句软弱无力也是不容忽略的一个方面。因此在英语写作教学中，如何增强语句表现力的问题必须引起我们足够的重视，以提高学生写作的表达质量。为此，笔者结合自己的写作教学实践，针对该项技能的训练提出了一些切实可行的有效做法，供广大同仁和英语学习者参考借鉴。
( S! |: y3 l" P3 N. r' E# k一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。化鳞生肌胶囊例如：
# L# t  ?9 q3 L6 `* P2 \# O2 `2 x1) Weak: The team members are good players.
Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker’s plan is the elimination of tardiness.
Revision: One worker’s plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：
1 w: ~! a5 J* q8 _/ e1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
5 q2 U7 y( n* |, M% i3 rRevision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
3 ]0 j5 r* p# @. y8 ~) y2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
& v4 q  ^) U# i; t二、多用语意具体的动词，化鳞生肌胶囊保持句意简洁明了。例如：
" P) k, R8 |1 K1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
& O, T2 G1 S5 ~& B1 Z: }! {Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
. _7 C* P: Y1 r+ d2 O2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
Better: She compares prices and quality.
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