化鳞生肌胶囊英语写作中增强语句表现力的方法

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化鳞生肌胶囊纵观多年来国家四、六级英语作文考试，考生作文成绩欠佳的主要原因除了准确性和连贯性差之外，语句软弱无力也是不容忽略的一个方面。因此在英语写作教学中，如何增强语句表现力的问题必须引起我们足够的重视，以提高学生写作的表达质量。为此，笔者结合自己的写作教学实践，针对该项技能的训练提出了一些切实可行的有效做法，供广大同仁和英语学习者参考借鉴。
* K7 w* u. U" d一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
* p/ G( P5 y, M2 B8 F7 NRevision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
/ h+ O7 l: B# lOr: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
; b! v9 \2 h1 Q2 d) P7 k; {( O. i2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。化鳞生肌胶囊例如：
1) Weak: The team members are good players.
Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker’s plan is the elimination of tardiness.
  d2 S4 m0 e, t, N+ l% c) bRevision: One worker’s plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：
1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
* y2 Z. D: i9 ]4 t1 ?2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
5 E, A7 S+ E5 [2 _4 k& ~/ y2 SRevision: The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词，化鳞生肌胶囊保持句意简洁明了。例如：
6 \- s3 f2 S% W5 z1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
, w& n; e% O3 k) C2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
/ c/ C) }0 L! B( k# pBetter: She compares prices and quality.
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