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四六级考前最好背下的六篇作文 (新添加部分注解)

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发表于 2006-12-7 14:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
1. Career or Family: which is more important?   
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.
  It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
  In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.

respond differently  不同的回答
deem  认为,相信
plays a key role  扮演重要角色
In the very first place  首先
What’s more  另外
On the other hand  另一方面
regarded as  把...认作
escape from  逃脱
In addition  另外
in opposition to  反对



2. Olympics and I
Dear friend,
  I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.
  This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.
  My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
  Sincerely yours,

Through long efforts  经过长期的努力
granted the right   获得...权利
In the first place   首先
definitely promote the development of our economy  确切地促进我们经济的发展
be widely recognized and accepted  被广泛地认同和接受
raise by  提高
Besides  此外
up-dated  更新
Moreover  而且 此外
offer one's help   提供某人的帮助



3. Tourism in China
  Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.
  Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.
  Though there are still some problems with tourism, I personally believe that tourism should be playing a key role in our life. I also hope that our government will make policies to create a better environment for tourists.

urban resident  城市居民
rural resident  乡镇居民
Facing this tendency  面对这样的趋势
living standard  生活水准
afford to  供给得起
scenic spots  景点
make policies to  指定方针



4. Income Gap
  There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it reflects different contributions that different people make in their work.. In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
  On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is another point to back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.
  As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to get rid of its negative consequences.

a heated discussion  热点问题
Accordingly  因此,从而
view negatively  持否定态度
criminal acts  犯罪行为
related to  涉及
low income  低收入
As anything has two sides  任何事物有两面性
get rid of  摆除 除去



5. Knowledge is power
  As a popular saying goes, knowledge is power. With our country developing fast, the importance of knowledge is becoming more and more obvious to us all.
  In the very first place, with knowledge, one can easily find jobs. It is often said that we are entering a new age of information, and knowledge plays a key role in this age. For example, if one wants to work in IT field, one needs to improve his knowledge constantly. What’s more, knowledgeable people can get quick promotion in their work. As is often the case, a person in charge of an organization is the one who has most knowledge. In addition, more knowledge is also needed to make our life rich and fulfilled.
  Accordingly, we must try hard to acquire as much knowledge as we can. Luckily, a lot of means may enable us to do so. Among other things, web proves the best and fastest way to get information.

entering a new age of   进入一个新时代
get quick promotion in   在..中取得很大提升
in charge of   负全责 经管 照顾
Accordingly  因此,从而
try hard to  努力



6. Saving animals
 There is an undeniable fact that the number of animals is declining faster than ever before. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 37 species disappear from our earth every year. It is obvious that the problem has become a serious one worth our concern.
  When we explore this problem, some underlying factors emerge. In the very first place, human beings have played a big part. With the fast development of human society, the environment is much destroyed, and animals lose their home. Accordingly, some species become extinct. What’s more, people hunt animals for food and skin. A good case in point is that the Japanese have killed a lot of whales because they like to eat the meat. In addition, human beings are largely
responsible for the pollution of natural environment, and poison animals in many ways.
  The current problem, I believe, should be solved immediately. First of all, our government should play a key role in making relevant rules and protecting animals. The general public should also be educated to value the existence of these animals on our planet.

undeniable fact  不可否认的事实
It is obvious that  显然
responsible for   为...负责  造成...的原因
natural environment   自然环境
The current problem   当前的问题
general public  广大人民群众



以上注解我看的时候填加的 可能有错可能不准确 还望大家指点

[ 本帖最后由 冬子 于 2006-12-23 10:46 编辑 ]

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-7 14:43 | 显示全部楼层
高中时候英文老师就强调过背范文的好处

这里转贴6篇范文 希望对考四六级的同学有帮助

我觉得不一定全部死记硬背下来 重点在看它的句型和表达 找回写英语作文的感觉
看熟了写作文的时候自然会很流畅
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发表于 2006-12-7 16:09 | 显示全部楼层
希望如此,有空看看。。。
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发表于 2006-12-7 16:22 | 显示全部楼层
thanks 冬MM~~
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发表于 2006-12-10 19:26 | 显示全部楼层
考完了雅思,写出来的作文一不小心就超过了150词,呵呵
当年通过四六级都是拿着本真题认认真真的做它几次就过了,四六级确实不难考,考倒人的是你准备的过程.
四六级没上过新东方的辅导班,很多时间是吹水.
后来有一个国庆节就跑去新东方上了7天的高级口语,感觉新东方唯一留给学生的就是一种自信和提供一种结识共同兴趣的朋友.从那个时候开始也学会了背诵一直到现在,感觉背诵是一种输入,就跟听力和阅读一样,输入是比较简单的,写作和口语是输出的,只有一定量的输入,输出才能达到比较理想的效果.
我比较喜欢背诵文段来记单词,例如:
as a college student ,we need to study and practice to improve our competence ,we need to participate and perform to build up our confidence ,we need to communicate and cooperate to cultivate or nurture our sociability
如果坚持这样背的话就很容易记住很多单词的,写作的时候用这种排比句写出来的文章是很有气势的.老外写作比较喜欢用排比句,有时还用上法语和希腊语,不过这应该是最TOP的那种人了.
总的来说,背在脑里的东西就是自己的,需要用的时候能够信手拈来才是牛人.
学无止境,大家努力啊
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发表于 2006-12-10 22:59 | 显示全部楼层
貌似雅思作文task1和task2的缩小版
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发表于 2006-12-13 13:15 | 显示全部楼层
上次已經在網站看到了,就下載下來啦!
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发表于 2006-12-15 16:17 | 显示全部楼层
不错
顶一下
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发表于 2006-12-16 00:44 | 显示全部楼层
没有动力就没有努力.又是背的~~~
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发表于 2006-12-16 13:14 | 显示全部楼层
复制了,有空去看看
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发表于 2006-12-16 15:57 | 显示全部楼层
四级还是六级的啊?
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发表于 2006-12-17 12:32 | 显示全部楼层
多谢分享.
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发表于 2006-12-17 17:55 | 显示全部楼层
呵呵
收下了
这次六级能过
要不就新题型拉...
www.........
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发表于 2006-12-18 17:17 | 显示全部楼层
thx for sharing
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发表于 2006-12-18 23:41 | 显示全部楼层
:victory: THX
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发表于 2006-12-22 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好.临急抱下都好.THX
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发表于 2006-12-23 00:15 | 显示全部楼层
顶一个·!
    明天要去考六级了·感觉很不踏实,好像又浪费了时间与金钱~◎
    六级~我永远的痛吗???·
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发表于 2006-12-23 00:36 | 显示全部楼层
临急抱佛脚,一篇都没看完

顶...
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-23 00:51 | 显示全部楼层
我决定明天早起 把这六篇一次啃下来
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发表于 2006-12-23 00:54 | 显示全部楼层
我竟然看了,友情UP
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